donwanna's Reviews

After reading the first 6 chapters, the story finally starts going at the end of said chapter 6.
But since it only has 20 chapters in total it seems it has been axed prematurely. I'm not sure paying money for it is worth it.

Well seems ok enough, but not good enough to spend ~ 0.24 cent/word.

Maybe if I could read up to chapter 7 as 1-6 is just the prelude IMHO.

Story has plot holes large enough to drive Russia's entire shadow fleet through. Sideways. With room to spare.

It is as if every time the author wrote himself into a corner he pulls a "just_kidding,_it_is_now_different"-card. Whole established motivations, traits of characters, and plot points are toppled over from one panel to the next.

Maybe the author ran out of ideas. But it is visible that the last part is rushed to a conclusion before it got axed.